
Policy Speech.docx
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Lauren!! You did a great job on your speech, your visual aid was very effective and you had a very clear and vivid voice. For next time, work on eye contct an it'll be perfct! <3 Chelsea
Lauren your outline looks great! You seem very prepared and have lots of good visual aids from what I can tell. Good stuff...just practice delivery (and time!) and you'll be fine! Good luck-Katie
Lauren, I really like your speech so far. Your attention getter is awesome. I feel really connected already, and I can't wait to hear your speech.
-Ryan Aukerman
You were very organized and clearly well informed about your topic! It is evident you feel comfortable in front of people! good job! -- Aimee
Lauren, amazing job you did really well with answering all the questions. more eye contact would only make your speech more wonderful- Kara
Lauren! Your speech was great today! Your visual aid was really good, especially the video clip. It seemd like you did a lot of research and knew what you were talking about. You had good inflection. Amazing job! -Katie
Lauren, your speech was awesome.you were very smooth throughout the speech and the video was great as well. I thought you could have used more eye contact, but i thought you were very descriptive on your solution. Great speech! - Alan
informative speech.docx
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Lauren! Great job today! You were very easy to understand and spoke very clearly and smoothly. Maybe next time work a little on having more eye contact.
-Caitlin
Lauren, you could tell you were very excited about this topic and it showed throughout your speech. I was impressed with how much you knew. Good job.
-Mark
Hey Lauren!
It was very evident that you have a lot of public speaking experience! You have a beautiful speaking voice and were very pleasant to listen to. Excellent annunciation of words. However, you did speed up a little bit at the end. You had a very interesting and factual speech. I would have NEVER known about the state theater if it weren't for your speech! - Tamar
Lauren, you did well with eye contact and you seemed to be well informed on your topic. Well done.
- Joe Kincel
Lauren, you spoke very well and your voice was very clear and it was very easy to hear you.
- Matt
Your speech was great, you had it packed with a lot of information and it was clearly well researched. Good job!
- Natalie
Lauren, you spoke confidently today and you seemed to enjoy the topic and knew a lot about it. You were very clear and I enjoyed the Introduction and first transition. Nicely done.
- Alan
Lauren, amazing job you did really well with answering all the questions. more eye contact would only make your speech more wonderful- Kara
Name: Lauren Grimes
AIM: modernmillie07
Email: lhg5003@psu.edu
Websites: http://psu.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1227210030
Interests: Singing, dancing, acting, going out with friends, going to the movies
Favorite musical: I love alot of them...I go through phases of them. I love Thoroughly Modern Millie, Hair, Spring Awakening, Pippin and so many more. I love going to New York and seeing shows.
Favorite music: Mostly all music except for country. I LOVE showtunes
Favorite tv shows: Basically anything on MTV, E!, or VH1
Family: 1 sister who is 13 years old and my mom and dad are PSU alums.
Work: Mimis American Bistro as a singing hostess. I also had an internship this year for a company that sends out and does marketing/PR/advertisements for national tours. I would love to work there when I'm older and that's why I'm majoring in communications and minoring in theatre. I love performing but I would also love to work with the business side of theatre.
About Me
What’s your full name? Lauren Heather Grimes
Were you named after anyone? Lauren Bacall and my great aunt Heddie
What are your nicknames? Laur, Raulen
What is your shoe size? 8.5-9
Do you like your handwriting? Yes
What is your birth date? March 16, 1989
Do you use sarcasm a lot? Yes
What is your hair color? Brown
What is your eye color? Brown
Do you wear contacts? No
What’s your astrological sign? Pisces
Are you a morning person or a night owl? Both but mosly Morning person
Do you wish on stars? Yes
Do you untie your shoes when you take them off? No
Do you think that you are strong? Yes
What’s your name, as it appears on your birth certificate? Lauren Heather Grimes
Do you have tattoos or piercings? 3 normal ear piercings, my tregus (ear) and my belly button
What do you do most often when you are bored: sleep
Donkey or Elephant or Neither? Donkey
What makes you angry? Annoying people
What did you do last night? watched a movie with friends
How many keys are on your key ring? 2
What do you do to relax? Listen to music, sing, dance, play the piano
Family, Pets, & Friends
Do you have any siblings? Yes, Melissa who is 13
Who is your best friend? Jeffrey Wei
Do you have any pets? A dog, Winnie
Who was your first pet? A fish
Who is the last person you talked to on the phone? Scott S
Travel
Where do you call home? Potomac, Maryland
What states have you been to? California Hawaii, Illinois, Massachussettes, Nevada, Pennsylvania, Tennessee, Virginia, West Virginia, Delaware, New Jersey, Ohio, New York, Maryland, North Carolina, Florida, Georgia
What's the furthest you've been from home? Paris
In how many states have you lived? One
Food
What do you like to eat for breakfast? Eggs, fruit, cereal sometimes
What is your favorite food? Cucumbers
What foods do you dislike? hmmmmm......???
What is your favorite chip flavor? original
What is your favorite sandwich? Turkey
What is your favorite drink? Orange Juice
What is your favorite ice cream flavor? Strawberry
What’s your favorite salad dressing? Thousand Island
Do you put croutons or bacon bits in your salad? Neither
Plain, buttered or salted popcorn? Plain or alittle butter
What’s your favorite pie? Pumpkin
What’s your favorite fast food place? Wendy’s
Chocolate or vanilla? Chocolate
What is your favorite restaurants? Mimi's (the place I work)
Media
Which Harry Potter house do you think you belong in? Griffindor
What was the last film you saw at the cinema? Licensed to Wed
What is your favorite TV show? I have alot of them
What books are you reading? none at the moment
Tunes you’re grooving to in your vehicle stereo right now? some showtune
What is your desktop background? Me and my friends with an actor from "Spring Awakening"
What is your ring tone? the "Lauren" song
Do you have a Facebook page? Yes!
MySpace? Yes
Products
What fabric detergent do you use? All
What’s your favorite soda? Dr. Pepper
What’s your favorite item of clothing? im not really sure
What’s your favorite brand of clothing? i love all of them
The Future and Hypotheticals
Where would you retire to? London
Which came first—the chicken or the egg? The chicken
If you could go anywhere in the world on vacation, where would you go? Italy
If you were another person, would YOU be friends with you? Yes
Would you ever bungee jump? I doubt it
Skydive? Yes
If you were a crayon, what color would you be? Robin's Egg Blue
Hey, Lauren, what's your favorite show? Thoroughly Modern Millie, or was that just for AIM? I'm a musicals fan, too :)
This is a good start--tell us a little more :)
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