By: Katie Huber 

Outline: Late Night Penn State outline.docx

Reviews

Name: Matt kujava

Comments: It was a good outline with good support for the main points.  But i dont think you need to have the fact that it is free as one of your main points.  You could probably put it in the point where you talk about the activities, and mention that it is free. 

Name: Mark Stankiewicz

Comments: You did a really good job with your speech. Your attention getter was solid and you used good facts and in speech citations. Watch your volume, you came off a little too soft at times.

Name: Tamar Brill

Comments: Katie! You had great eye contact, and content! I could tell that you were well prepared for your speech.  Next time try to add more personality to it so it doesn't just sound like it's been read. You still set a high standard as the first one to go! :)

Name: Joe Kincel

Comments: I liked your attention-getter with the "We are Penn State" chant in the beginning. This certainly grabbed the attention of the whole class. I felt that you could have made better eye contact with the class at times, but the flow of your speech was great. I also commend you for going first, good job.

Name: Natalie

Comments: Interesting topic choice, very informative. Good job going first, you're brave!

Name: Alan

Comments: With being the first person to present today, you seemed confident about your speech. You gave strong eye contact at some points and read along at other times. The flow of your speech was very good and gave your audience abundant information. Good job.

Name: Lisa

Hey katie! I loved your intro WE ARE PENN STATE, it caught my attention right away. Good job.